Sunday, 24 April 2022

The man in black - chapter 1 (short story)

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Cassie laughed.

“Yeah, that’s the most likely answer!”

“Sure, laugh!” said Anna, “I’m not sure it was technically in the syllabus!”

Cassie was in a small café in the mall near their university. The semester was over, and many of them would be heading home for the next month. That is why they had gone there for a movie, some gift shopping, and to have some fun with friends before that.

“Can we talk about something that’s, you know, not subject related?” asked Jake, “for example, which film are we watching?”

“There are a few good options,” said Dany, Jake’s girlfriend and newest addition to their group, “Okay, two as far as I am concerned. What about the rest of you?”

Phil had the website of the theatre up on his phone. “Boring romance, comedy, with huge inverted commas around 'comedy', not in English, not in English, superhero, action movie, and super serious awards bait. Dany’s right, there are only two options.”

“You can go watch the awards bait,” said Lex, “it might help you catch up on some sleep.”

“Very funny,” said Phil, “seriously, which one shall we watch?”

Cassie noticed a huge stack of boxes at the counter of the coffee shop. Probably some sort of order, she thought. There were two employees in the shop, and they were stacking it there. Cassie expected someone would come pick it up.

By now, the shop was almost empty except for them. That was no wonder, as they were a little past teatime. Most people would start having dinner. Cassie wondered who would be ordering stuff from a café at this time. Maybe it was for a party. That sort of made sense, especially if they’d be having dinner at late at night.

Anna sipped her coffee. “Let’s pick one when we get there. What do we do about food? Smuggle it in, or buy popcorn?”

“Eat once it’s over?” asked Dany, “it’s less illegal, somehow. They don’t want you smuggling food it because it stinks.”

“She’s got a point,” said Phil, “but I’m not buying popcorn. Seriously, why isn’t this a watch party at one of our rooms again?”

“Never occurred to anyone?” asked Cassie.

A pair of men came into the café. Cassie noticed they were dressed somewhat formally, but fancily. It was a party, probably some sort of minor cooperate event, thought Cassie. They started talking with the cashier. The waiter went out to get a trolley. Cassie could see why that would be needed. The car park was not that far away, but it was a lot of boxes.

“Let’s have a bit of a snack before the movie starts,” said Phil, “we have at least an hour to kill as it stands because someone’s idea of shopping was, well, strangely efficient.”

“I don’t like shopping, that’s why I made a list,” said Dany.

“Not judging you. Just an observation.”

“So, order some sandwiches?” asked Jake.

They all looked at each other, and a few of them nodded. Jake went up to the counter and placed the order. Just then, the waiter returned with a trolley. Cassie admired his self-control. She would have used it as a skateboard.

Both employees and the two men who came with them were kept busy filling up the trolley. The seven of them sipped their drinks slowly, trying to decide on a film, which then drifted into debate/ discussion about a previous film. Cassie hadn’t watched it, so she let Phil, Lex, and Bella debate it. The trolley was filled up, the men paid in cash, and they wheeled the trolley out. The waiter followed them, presumably to help them load it into a vehicle.

The waiter returned a few minutes later. He collapsed on a chair behind the counter. The cashier went into the kitchen. Cassie assumed it was to make the sandwiches they had ordered.

Outside, the mall was fairly crowded. The shop was a little glass island in the middle of the mall. There was a speciality food shop a little way away. It was way out of their price range. There was a couple of branded clothes shops. There was also a bookshop. Cassie wanted to go in there, in a way, but buying physical books didn’t make a lot of sense given her current living situation.

Cassie had her work cut out for her over the break. She had decided to go home for two weeks. The air ticket was expensive, but she wouldn’t have a chance to go home over the next summer because of her internship, which meant it was now or never. Going home would probably mean a trip, lots of food, and buying lots of stuff to bring back. On the other hand, she would not get any work done during that time, and she really wanted to practice what she had learned that semester, at least to stay in touch with things.

She had her sandwich mostly in silence as the discussion turned into a full-blown debate between Bella and Lex. She spent her time studying those around her. The couple sitting at the next table sat up. They finished and then paid the bill. They were dressed well. Possibly a date, Cassie decided. There was another man sitting alone at a table, staring at his phone and inhaling coffee. He wouldn’t be there long either, thought Cassie. He desperately needed to be awake for something, probably work of some sort given how he was scrolling through something on his phone.

The man stood up, as Bella launched into a tirade about a scene in the film they were talking about and how it illustrated her point. He paid the bill, and left. Their group was the only one left in the café. It wasn’t an issue, as there was a couple of hours to the displayed closing time.

Then someone walked in. Cassie sat up immediately. This person was wearing a long coat – a weird choice given the climate – as well as a black hat and a black mask, with dark sunglasses. They were also carrying a plain black drawstring bag and wearing gloves. Cassie couldn’t tell anything more about them other than their height – roughly in the 170 cm range – and the fact that they were wearing regular shoes most men would wear to work. Also, their hair was black and a little longer than shoulder length, but that was likely a wig.

Cassie stiffened. She nudged Dany, who was seated next to her. Phil, too appeared to have noticed what was happening.

Then, this person unfolded a piece of paper from their coat pocket and displayed it to the cashier. Cassie noticed her eyes widen.

Cassie realized it immediately – the shop was being robbed, and they were in the way if anything were to happen.



END OF CHAPTER ONE

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